I can see the mistakes

Yes, that story I just completed has too much repetition in. It's because I had to write a further 500 words. I would have been happier with 400 words. That's the trouble with following an assignment. I think stories should be as long as you want them to be. (Bearing in mind that for publication, you might have to knuckle down to a given remit.) I'll redo the piece, but won't post it here again. Just be assured that it will be 100% perfect!!! ;-)